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There are two articles: “The Empathy Diaries (pg, 378-387)” from Sherry Turkle and “Necessary Edges: Arts, Empathy and Education (pg.277-282)” by Yo-yo Ma. They are both in the documents down there. Also the requirements on one of the documents.

This paper should be changed to 5 paragraphs an its 4.5 full pages without titling and resources. The opening should include two articles and its main idea. There should be 3 bodies in the essay which each body should 1 quote from each article. Please write the page number after the quote.