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We are going to write final draft rn, I got some comments and feedback on the first draft you can check it out,

according to the comments, I think my professor wants me use the story to illustrate a social phenomenon, i think he wants to see some interesting unique thinking of the insight in the essay, not just the analysis of the story.

So the essay format should be talking about a social phenomenon which could reflect the insight (O’Connor demonstrates the flawed nature of human beings and emphasizes on their hypocritical ways and use of religion to support one’s agendas.

), analysis it, give some example maybe, and use some quotes from story and secondary resources to support the insight.

For the final draft，80% should about the phenomenon, analysis of phenomenon or whatever interesting unique thinking about the insight, 20% use the quotes from story and secondary resources to support the insight.